My New Feature Article

I did not think that my feature article was very good, some of the people I showed it to thought it was too short and simple, as a result I decided to re-do it completely by coming up with a new (more interesting) storyline which I would write up in article form, rather that question and answer form as I did previously with the other one.Although my storyline was different, I still wanted to keep the idea of bricks in my head because most of my favourite shots featured a brick background, as a result, I titled the article 'Back To The Blocks'
Below is my new article: